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The silver in your eyes by ~yourshadowlover:iconyourshadowlover:



Deceitfulness will chime into a chorus
of outstanding sopranos.
Sharp gaze focused upon only me,
the reflective surface of cold metallic eyes
blinds me, and yet,
I cannot look away.

Hazel once blended well with oceanic blue
meshing equally well with fiery satin,
but the sheen is too harsh and cruel
to those who do not give into the pain.

And I thought that it could be simple
like in times when a smile could say
I love you,
but instead the hurt you've caused has
cut so deeply,
bleeding me out into the bathroom sink.

Naivete led me to think that
I love you meant
I care for you.

But I've learned my lesson now,
it's too late for I'm sorry.
I watch the death of me
in the reflective surface
of what used to be
my lovers eyes.

I cannot look away.
©2007-2009 ~yourshadowlover
:iconyourshadowlover:

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I just don't know anymore.

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:iconjadisofeternity:
good poem. I can see it, feel it...ah..I hate to just say good and give no meaningful feedback but it is so hard to give meningful feedback on poetry, even for a poet.

also, I liked this how you wrote "do not give into the pain"...I am thinking what you meant is not give in...to the pain...but what a cool concept when we give in to pain, we are giving something...ourselves...into it...making it more...losing something. I just never thought about it quite like that before. I always thought of giving in as something like giving up, but it's not, it's like...givning ourselves into something...

thankyou

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-------Jadis///...
:shamrock: "with God all things are possible" :shamrock:
:iconyourshadowlover:
This was actually inspired by my best friend who was sorely in love with someone who never loved him back. He commited suicide shortly after. So I wanted to capture the feeling of not being able to stop loving someone who hurts you.... I dunno, it's hard to explain. Haha, sorry.

--
Look,
the azure sky that crushes us
licks up our spines.

-Bleach

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